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I love this child bible story...and im in fifth grade!!!!yay!!!!

A great tale to tell to others.

I liked the child bible story. I have looked at many short stories about animals and found most of them to be very weak. This child bible story will capture the attention of my afterschool children 1st through 4th grade.We are making animals of the zoo our subject of study for the summer.We have a zoo sleep-over planned at the end of summer. I wonder what kind of child bible story could come out of children sleeping at the zoo? If you come up with something let me know.

I love this child bible story. It's cool and simple to read.

It was very good and it made me read it more.

Lauren 12 yr 8 :)

Features cybertale including original stories, jokes,and other activities for fun loving kids.

If you do your best, you can success!!

Famous fairy tales and fables by The Grimm Brothers and Hans Christian Anderson and Charles Perrault with colorful illustrations.

Children of today lack the ability to imagine. Most even lack guidance, morals and respect. This child bible story sparked the imagination, included a clear moral and you as a writer have my respect. Thank you.

Good but needs pictures

My daughter giggled through most of this bible story for toddler. Although she began to loose interest toward the end. We did not care much for the ending but I would read again it to a 2nd grade class.

Good child bible story. perfectly!

I LOVE THE bible story for toddler AND MERMAIDS IT IS AWESOME

I think is a cool bible story for toddler, but it can be more exciting

The child bible story was quite good, and I would like to read more stories by the author. I do think that the the child bible story could have been ended better though.

The ending has surprising me...in the middle of the child bible story,i think the soldier will marry with the youngest princess...but its ok...not bad...n.n/

Interesting flashback to the stories of Brer Rabbit and trickster heroes. Not bad, but the end was disjointed, as was the title. The child bible story could have safely concluded with the deposition of Kali and been titled accordingly.

An online child story written and illustrated in colous by Annabel Spenceley..

I think its not a good child bible story for children cuz it gives them different thoughts and this is not a true child bible story.....

It is a good child bible story and i like this forum.

It is a good child bible story and i like this forum.

Lauren 12 yr 8 :)

Good description, could use work at the end. The part about it being stolen seems random and unnecessary.

Okay, duh, she's a witch, she can use magic, thats how, plus use your immagingation